Blank Check
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IMDB rating: 4.10 Plot: Preston Waters is a 12 year old boy who is sick of his parents always teaching him the value of money. Little does he know, he is about to learn it. When a smart crook, Carl Quigley, nearly kills Preston by running over his bike, he mistakenly fills out a blank cheque, which Preston prints out for $1 Million. Preston convinces the bank manager to cash the cheque, and when Quigley’s employee returns to collect the money for Quigley and finds that the bank manager has given it to a kid, Quigley sets out to track the kid down and get his money. Preston creates the pseudonym of ‘Macintosh’ to handle his finance, and the police get suspicious. Preston begins his spending, but later becomes aware that he must avoid Quigley who is on his back, and the police seperately attempt to work out the mystery behind ‘Macintosh’. Will Preston be convinced that money is’nt everything. |
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Actors: Bonsall Brian,Rebhorn James,Faustino Michael,Demetral Chris,Ferrer Miguel,Lerner Michael,Loc Tone,Ducommun Rick,Zuckerman Alex,Morris Alex,Polk Michael,Comedy,Family,
How do I get my wordpress themes to show in the appearance mode?
In my dashboard when I click the appearance function, my themes show as blank squares with a little red "x" in the upper left corner. My tool bar does the same thing when logged in under wp admin. Spell check, etc. are all blank.
It would be nice to know whether this is .org or .com Wordpress site. Anyway the dreaded red X typically indicates a corrupted cache problem, ActiveX or Javascript problems. So clear your cache first. If you still have the problem > This could be caused by your Internet Explorer security settings being set too high, antivirus or firewall software can also block the images and the last thing is your Wordpress website is simply just hosed. Set your security settings to low in IE and make sure your firewall or antivirus software is not blocking your site images. Also if you have Firefox installed you can check your admin panel using Firefox. If everything still doesn’t look right at this point then right mouse click on the red X on one of your missing theme image pics and look at the path. Since this is occurring in both the themes area and your toolbar it is indicating that you have some sort a file path problem. Did you move anything recently? Did you rename any Wordpress folders recently? Did you change your style.css header info? If you can’t correct the path problem you are only left with trying to fix Wordpress from your SQL DB or lastly reinstalling Wordpress. Make a backup first, unless of course you have a Wordpress.com Freebie site then they back that up for you and you can request to have your freebie site restored from backup. Good luck.
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Karate Kid, The
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IMDB rating: 6.80 Plot: Daniel is new in town, and is getting picked on by the local bullies, who all are adept in karate. Determined to stick up for himself, Daniel begins to teach himself karate, only to discover that the caretaker at his apartment seems to be a grand master in karate. Agreeing to teach Daniel, Mr. Miyagi shows Daniel that there is more to karate than violence, and perhaps the best way to solve the problem he has with the bullies is in the All Valley Karate Championship. |
Actors: Macchio Ralph,Morita Pat,Kove Martin,Zabka William,Thomas Ron,Garrison Rob,McQueen Chad,O’Dell Tony,Juarbe Israel,Bassett William,Scott Larry B.,Avalon Frank Burt,Fishman Jeff,Daly Ken,Fridley Tom,Drama,Family,Sport,
I hate my Parents!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?
OK well i am 16 and my dad is bipolar and my mom has some kind of mental problems at least that is what i think. My dad and i don’t really have a good relationship and he never talks to me or i never talk to him. The only time he talks is if he is yelling at me. I am a very sensitive person and i can not handle it. He says things to me like i am sick and tired of you and he wants me to move out as soon as i turn 18 or better yet now he tells me but he say it with foul language. He has to take a lot of medicine and he has been to the mental hospital about 2 years ago because my parents fight a lot and he threated that he was going to put my mom in the trunk of her new jaguar and drive of a cliff while she is sleeping and a lot more stuff. My mom treats me like a five year literally. When ever i am over my friends house who lives down the street from me she calls me every half an hour and when i have to go home she has to walk me home so i don’t get "kidnapped" and i don’t live in a bad neighborhood at all and stuff like this doesn’t usually happen and if i did i could defend myself but noooo she says "what he were to have a gun and i would say then i will dial 911 and she would say that wouldn’t work cause you will be already dead. I can’t start driving lessons because i am to "immature" at least that is what she thinks. I try really hard in school and i get As and Bs sometimes Cs and i never got in trouble once in school and never got into a fight or detention. She always puts me down for ex: i wanted to become an actor when i was little and still want to become one and she told me that 1 and million kids get to become an actor/actress and you are not talented to do it. Then i wanted to be an architect and she told me no because no one is going to buy your buildings because we are in a recession and i told her how do you know that we are still going to be in a recession 10 years from now. Then she told me you need to go in the medical field because you get good money if you become a doctor and i hate looking at blood and stuff i have weak stomach. Know i would like to become a professional chef but i am afraid to tell her because i no she is going to say no to that too because she doesn’t want me to use knives. I cant have a girlfriend until i am
18. I cant leave my neighborhood cause there is a busy road but i do anyway to ride my bike around the city with my friends. I am not aloud to even she my friends that often because she thinks they are a bad influence and she doesn’t even know them after i known them since first and third grade. She never wants to go to my parent teacher conferences because she says i am already doing good when i want her to go. I can never sit in the front seat because if we were to get in an accident i will get killed cause of the airbag even though i am 5/11. She starts everything with fights and stuff and she says i have to ruin everything and then i get grounded. i could never do any sports like karate because its too dangerous and i have been telling that i want to play the piano for a year know and she still never did anything even though we have the money i mean my mom and dad own two homes and still nothing. I get everything i want as electronic wise and when i want to play a instrument she doesn’t do anything.she never takes me anywhere my sister in law does with my niece and nephew. I told just recently to make me an eye appointment cause i am having trouble seeing far distances and she tells me that i am just saying that because everybody else has glasses but i don’t i just want to be able to see because it tends to be a problem in school. I talk to my friends about while i am crying on the phone because my mom yells at me and she tells me she hates me and that she is sick and tired of me and i already get enough of it because of my dad and he already makes me upset and my mom isn’t any help and i already stressed out cause of school and i come home and cry everyday and i feel like my brain is going to explode and i just cant take it anymore. Please help me:(
No one’s gonna read a wall of text but I’m pretty sure it’s normal for a 16 year old to hate his/her parents.
Twelfth Account | Feb 03, 2010
considering i just read the whole thing, i think you should talk yo your father or other family relative, or someone at school their always good to talk to as they have councillors.
i do hope your home condition improves, have you ever considered moving out seeing as your 16 aren’t you allowed to do that?
i mean when your 18 you could definitely do that i would get out of there!
i feel sorry for you alot 
Estellaa. | Feb 03, 2010
when you are 16 things always seem worse!!! please trust me i know how you feel!! iv bein there!! they dont seem to understand you atal!! but the thing is you have got to understand that your mother does what she does because she loves you! you are still young and through times thinsg will change and get better!! in the mean time i suggest you try your hardest to cope!! expalin to your mom how u feel!!! stick at your school work get good grade and do what YOU want to do in life!!! your decisons are what counts
Curious17 | Feb 03, 2010 Uncategorized | Comment (0)
The Wild Thornberrys Movie
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IMDB rating: 4.70 Plot: On an African safari, Eliza Thornberry discovers that thanks to a shaman, she can now talk to animals. When Eliza discovers that poachers in Africa’s Serengeti Desert plan to kill an elephant herd with an electrified fence, she and her chimpanzee friend Darwin must somehow find a way to stop them. |
Actors: Kane Tom,Curry Tim,Curry Tim,Flea,Peters Brock,Adventure,Animation,Family,Comedy,Fantasy
Do you think he is immensely attractive even in his old age?
I know I do.
Tim Curry
He was sexy young, AND old.
I’ll post some pics:
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I think he is just…gorgeous!!
I’ve gotta meet your doctor then!
sadly, I’m only fourteen…=/
No not really
But the one with him wearing thoe girl stuff , lol that made me laugh
Uncategorized | Comment (0)The Indian
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IMDB rating: 8.60 Plot: “The Indian” is a touching drama about a negligent father who must face the son he abandoned years earlier, and the emotional wreckage he caused, in order to obtain a life-saving transplant. The father hires a beautiful young mechanic to help restore an old Indian motorbike and uses her and the restoration process to manipulate his troubled teenage son’s emotions. Complications arise when the father has difficulty maintaining the lie to both his son and himself. |
Actors: Dallas Matt,Landi Sal,Portnow Richard,Miano Robert,Sattels Barry,Hart Jesse,Timbrook Corbin,Fitzpatrick Jim,Dano Rick,Drama,Family,Romance,
where in new york can you buy virgin Indian and brazilian hair?
I’m not looking to purchase hair online. If anyone who lives in new york knows a great hair supply store that sell micro ring/link extensions(pre tip/pre bond) please let me know.
Elf
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IMDB rating: 6.80 Plot: Buddy (Will Ferrell) was a baby in an orphanage who stowed away in Santa’s sack and ended up at the North Pole. Later, as an adult human who happened to be raised by elves, Santa allows him to go to New York City to find his birth father, Walter Hobbs (James Caan). Hobbs, on Santa’s naughty list for being a heartless jerk, had no idea that Buddy was even born. Buddy, meanwhile, experiences the delights of New York City (and human culture) as only an elf can. When Walter’s relationship with Buddy interferes with his job, he is forced to reevaluate his priorities. |
Actors: Ferrell Will,Caan James,Newhart Bob,Asner Edward,Tay Daniel,Love Faizon,Dinklage Peter,Lerner Michael,Richter Andy,Gass Kyle,Lange Artie,Family,Comedy,Fantasy,
Dragon Age Origins Questions?
Ok well I have a few questions pertaining to this game, because its really quite frustrating.
1. If your a female elf can you become queen and rule with Alistair?
2. How can you stay with Alistair if your an elf?
3. Can any of your characters deal the last blow to the Archdemon?
4. If you let Alistair kill Loghain what happens?
Well that’s all I can think of for now, so if you can answer any of these that would be great. *I don
Uncategorized | Comment (0)Witches, The
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IMDB rating: 6.50 Plot: A young boy, recently orphaned, is taken to England by his grandmother. At a hotel in which they are staying, a group of witches have gathered to prepare a plot to rid the world of all children. |
Actors: Fisher Jasen,Atkinson Rowan,Paterson Bill,Potter Charlie,Fantasy,Family,Horror,
Swollen teats, bloody stool, vomiting in dog?
My silky terrier trixie has been acting violent. we thought she was just abought to go into heat, and like usual her teats swelled up. However Her vagina is not sowllen and secreting like it usally dose, and there is no heat comming from it at all, only her teats. She had very bloody stool and hasnt been eating well, this morning she vomited a clear, slimy substance, witch she has before when she dosent feel well. There is milk comming from her teats, but i have to press hard to get it out and it seems it hurts her. the skin around her teats is turning red like a sore.
we are taking her to the vet just to be carefull, but id like to ask if this is something that happens or is it something i should worry abought after all?
I’m not sure about the bloody stool, but everything else sounds like a false pregnancy.
My mom’s dog used to get false pregnancies and she would get milk and would be really sore and because of that, it would cause her to vomit. We should have spayed her. It’s a huge regret. It’s very painful, uncomfortable and confusing for them.
Take her to the vet. She really needs it. They will run tests and may give her a shot of cortisone to ease the "pregnancy."
rachel | Feb 01, 2010
Poor thing! I am guessing false pregnancy.
Ann Katherine | Feb 01, 2010
Must go to a vet.
Too many issues going on right now.
False prego usually occurs a couple of weeks after being in heat. COuld be multiple issues happening right now.
No way to diagnose over the phone/internet etc.
So need to go to Vet..
I wish you all luck!
Callie | Feb 01, 2010 Uncategorized | Comment (0)
Five Children and It
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IMDB rating: 5.50 Plot: ‘It’ is a Psammead (voiced by Eddie Izzard), an ancient, ugly and irritable sand fairy the children find one day on a secret beach at their uncle’s mansion. It grants them one wish per day, lasting until sunset. But they soon learn it is very hard to think of really sensible wishes, and each one gets them into unexpected difficulties. Magic, the children find, can be as awkward as it is enticing. |
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Actors: Highmore Freddie,Jennings Alex,Bailey Jonathan,Muggleton Alec,Muggleton Zak,Branagh Kenneth,Pownall Alexander,Izzard Eddie,Serafini Georgio,Sessions John,Fenton Kim,Adventure,Family,Fantasy,
I need HELP FAST!!! Is this in prose form? If not how can I change it into prose? VERY IMPORTANT!!!!!?
There was a politician, firm in his conservative beliefs
He wakes up and goes to work at five am each day.
At the slightest thought of helping others he feels severe distress just thinking about his own life.
He
Bugsy Malone
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IMDB rating: 6.20 Plot: A gangster movie where all the gangsters are children. Instead of real bullets they use “splurge guns” that cover the victim in cream. The story tells of the rise of “Bugsy Malone” and the battle for power between “Fat Sam” and “Dandy Dan”. |
Actors: Baio Scott,Cassisi John,Lev Martin,Murphy Paul,Russell Sheridan Earl,Jenkins Albin ‘Humpty’,Chirelstein Paul,Paul Andrew,Knight Davidson,Jackson Michael,Stevens Jeffrey,Holder Peter,Waugh Donald,Crime,Family,Comedy,Musical,
What film can you watch over and over again?
What film can you just watch over and over constantly? I used to be able to watch something like Bugsy Malone, but now I am obsessed with The Chorus (Les Choristes) IT ROCKS!
The nutty professor. So funny never fails to leave me in tears of laughter.
honey | Jan 09, 2010
Girl Interrupted; The MACHINIST
Mogsy | Jan 09, 2010
Titanic!
Elvis Presley | Jan 09, 2010
I totally can watch the Hangover again and again!!!
Lani | Jan 09, 2010
sister act 2
i like les choristes too – we watched it in our french lesson last month
have you seen les diabolics?
even better than les choristes!
Farty McFart | Jan 09, 2010
The Railway Children. E. Nesbit.
racysilver | Jan 09, 2010
Dirty Dancing , I love films with dancing in them . Cabaret is another
christine lrice cake queen | Jan 09, 2010
O Brother Where Art Thou,great soundtrack….
active trader | Jan 09, 2010
This is one of the only sites I’ve found that works:
http://tra.kz/lwi
It asks you to do a survey but then it should take you right to the game! Enjoy
Rosaura | Jan 15, 2010
Secondhand Lions
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IMDB rating: 7.50 Plot: 13 year old Walter has had a hard life, with his no good floozy of a mother getting together with many equally despicable men. Before going on yet another husband-hunting trip, she drops him off at the house of his great-uncles Hub and Garth. They disappeared for quite a while in their youth, and are rumored to have acquired a great fortune, which Walter’s mother hopes to get her hands on if he can ingratiate himself enough to the two cantankerous men. Though reluctant to put up with him at first, Hub and Garth grow to accept Walter, and even tell him fantastic stories of what they were up to while they went missing. When his mother returns, Walter must take charge of his own life, and decide what he’s going to do with it. |
Actors: Caine Michael,Duvall Robert,Osment Haley Joel,Katt Nicky,Lucas Josh,O’Neill Michael,Balfour Eric,Kane Christian,Haberer Kevin,Ozturk Adam,Musso Mitchel,Adventure,Comedy,Drama,Family,Romance,
How much money would i get for these movies if i traded them into Moviestop? I NEED HELP SOON!?
How much cash could i get for all of this?
The Incredibles(2 disc Collectors Edition)
Oceans Thirteen
Transformers(2 disc special edition)
Troy(2 Disc Special edition)
King Kong(2 Disc Special Edition)
National Treasure
‘300
Mission Impossible 3
Black Knight
Ciffhanger
The Departed(2 Disc Special Edition) 2 of these.
Insanitarium
All 3 Lord of the Rings(2 disc special edition, all of them)
Austin Powers: Goldmember
See no Evil
Rush hour 3
Gridiron Gang
Deja Vu
Blades of Glory
Harry potter and the goblet of fire
Batman Begins
Disturbia
Shrek 2
Monster House
Ghost Rider(2 Disc Extended Cut)
Ratatouile
Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets
Oceans Eleven
We are Marshall
Casino Royale
Live Free Die Hard
Secondhand Lions
LOST Season 4
I need to know how much, liek the maximum id get in cash for all of these!
If they even wanted them all you might get $1 a movie and maybe $5 for Lost Season 4. Hope I helped….
doing things like 123 | Nov 19, 2009
Out of what you have listed, you might make a total of $30 – 50. It doesn’t matter that they are 2 disc sets, either. I can honestly say that you’re better off attempting to sell them separately on Ebay, or as a lot. You’ll probably get more for them. Yes, you may have paid full price for them, but places like Moviestop don’t care, and will give you $1 for most of them.
RickDVD | Nov 20, 2009 Uncategorized | Comment (0)
Return to Never Land
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IMDB rating: 5.60 Plot: The classic tale of ‘Peter Pan’ continues in Disney’s sequel ‘Return to Never Land’. In a world besieged by World War II, Wendy, now grown up, tries to give her own children hope by telling them of her magical experiences with Peter Pan in Never Land. However, Jane, Wendy’s 12-year-old daughter, sees it all as make believe and refuses to believe in the tales. That is, until the villainous Captain Hook mistakes her for Wendy and abducts her to Never Land in an attempt to lure and capture Peter Pan. Peter Pan’s quest to return Jane safely home is jeopardized until she can begin to believe in the magic of imagination. |
Actors: Weaver Blayne,Burton Corey,Bennett Jeff,McDonough Andrew,Rees Roger,Breslin Spencer,Pierce Bradley,Beswick Quinn,Spann Aaron,Castellaneta Dan,Cummings Jim,Paulsen Rob,Revill Clive,Animation,Adventure,Family,Fantasy,Musical,
I need your opinion on the latest story I finished~Jasmin Cullen A Midnight Countess. . .(First Thirst,:)?
OMG! ok hi guys I finally finished this section of Jasmin’s life with the Cullens HER FIRST THIRST:)
I’m excited to let you guys see it,or read it I tried to make it picture able in your head:)OH I want to let you see what she looks like to so here’s the link to her video~(just random girls that have her characteristics and stuff,along with a few dragons and pictures of mya but she’s easy to picture just an elegant and proper black cat that’s over a hundred years old:)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z2Rnsv0tT 1s
ok sooo about the story,its abit different because it’s never been like this:)but anyway lets just skim through what’s happened so far~
Ok SO if you were reading along with each story I’ve written you already know what happened but if you didn’t then you might want to read this.Jasmin is basically an orphan from another world(a world for dragons)but she was different she was cursed from the day she was born(her mother was a wizard and was killed)and when wizards are killed while pregnant their children are proofed away to an enchanted orphanage.Where she had the seed of the dragon put in her and the curse made her hair turn black and curly.But being cursed had it’s advantages for her she was given powers/abilities
some from being cursed and some from having the dragon seed
(not a real seed that’s just the term for it, just a figure of speech lol:)
So they gave her these abilities-ability to freeze time~(from curse) she doesn’t use it that often because she has to wait the length of an hour for time to progress again.Next ability erase minds~(being cursed)she can only use it when the person doesn’t desire to know something or doesn’t care or never really thought about it,Example~like she accidentally told her secret,and the person doesn’t know her or love her then she can erase that mind from knowing she was even there or that she said anything.Example why she couldn’t erase mind~If she had to leave the Cullens for some reason
and never return: to make their lives easier and peaceful she would want to erase their minds so that they would forget about her,but she wouldn’t be able to do that because they love her to much and they desire to have her around and stuff so there you go:)Third ability Examine minds all dragons have this ability(from being a dragon)it’s not like Edwards power reading minds,a dragon can peer into the persons inner most thought about anything the dragon want to know,whether its a past memory or something recent,kind of like reading into the soul not what the person is thinking.Jasmin wouldn’t be able to know what you were thinking.to use this ability she was to place her hand on the
person’s fore head.her eyes start to glow (white light) and the area around her hand on the head starts to glow too.Last but not least her water bending another dragon ability.She has this ability
from being a water dragon ,dragons vary from lava(fire lava) sun(light lightning electricity)
Dark(Poison the spirits~evil) Earth(plants trees flowers) god/goddess(most powerful control and time,space)~most of them are the protectors over the homeland forming the Centurion.(includes Jasmin’s adopted dragon father) ice(snow ice sleet hail) water(rain controls the sea/oceans storms water ice snow) water and ice dragons are some what the same but an ice dragon can’t do anything with water but they can form ice/frost but if it’s melted they can’t use it ,it has to be frozen.Water dragons can freeze the water then re-melt it ,soo water and ice dragons work together when they need too. there are also dragons that rely on the creatures like rodents and birds and bugs and things those are called the peace dwelling dragons Oh and dragons of the winds(they can turn winds into tornadoes and stuff with the winds)these are basically the different types of dragons umm Oh ok back to Jasmin,well her gypsie/dragon family had to take care of her and teach her how to use her powers,and try to keep her under their wing,her gypsie father knew there was something
special about her so he took extra special care of her.He also knew that there was an evil attachment to her not in her characteristics ,Jasmin was the sweetest thing ever,but in her soul.When she was cursed it was put in her and if she was to become overwhelmed with something or loose control of herself and mind it could be unleashed.So her father helps her with that.But one day in the homeland ,Pirates(evil creatures that resemble demons.they were named pirates as a general term for they invaded the homeland that’s what all invaders are called.But these pirates eat dragons) they invaded the land stealing the gypsie children(like Jasmin)and training them and using their power for evil.So Jasmin’s father (knowing that if they got Jasmin(having that evil thing in her) they wouldn’t ever be stopped.)So her family had no choice but to send her to the human world so that she could be safe;For the pirates couldn’t get through to the human world.So aroun
OMG IT TOTALLY CUT OFF ON ME
OMG I HAVE TO TYPE THIS ALL OVER???!!!!! OMG THIS IS RIDICULOUS OMG WELL HOLD ON WHILE I TRY TO REMEMBER WHAT ELSE I WROTE!!! UGH!!!!
OMG well OMG LOL I STILL CAN’T BELIVE IT DID THAT TO ME LOL but here it is~ The pirates couldn’t get through to the humand world so around age seven Jasmin was sent to the human world in america in the state of Wyoming/Cheyenne where she was once again an orphan.a few months later in the orphanage she was adopted by the Evans family,in this family Jasmin had a mother>Sherl a father>George two brothers>Kyle,Peter ,an older sister>Nicole a baby sister>Mary a granpa>George and grandma>Patty Jasmin never really loved her human family that much,but she did cling to her mother,and grandpa more than any of them.The rest of her family didn’t really
think much of her they didn’t really consider her apart of the family eapecially the children.The mother would always get upset with them when they would treat Jasmin the way they did
but Jasmin would always tell her that she didn’t care.Jasmin’s grandpa was one of her closest family members he would rather be with her than the rest of the
Ok Omg I’m no where near finished lol but here it is~
Jasmin was with her human family for a total of three years until her life changed from others it would be considered a turn for the worst but to her it was always an escape from this human life that she couldn’t stand.The day her grandfater past away it was a tragedy,but Jasmin wouldn’t dare show it.She was riding in the car with her mother and grandmother.They were riding back home from the funeral because the grandma had a doctors appointment that she couldn’t miss.The rest of the family went out to eat but Jasmin didn’t want to go. Suddenly out of no where a deer ran out in front of the car and just stood there gazing at the lights.Jasmin’s mother tried to swirve out of the way of it but she hit it anyway and crashed into the tree.They were all suverely injured.
Jasmin tried not to think about the curse
while all of this was happening for she new that she was going to die she just knew it,until a mysterious man came
Jasmin recognized his characteristics
from something but it didn’t quite hit her right away till she felt how cold his skin wasthen she remembered learning about creatures such as vampires from gypsie/dragon school.Not knowing that this vampire was kind and friendly she was certain that he was going to kill her.But then she asked a question a question to test his reaction to see if he was stuck on eating/killing her.She asked him to change her into a vampire.
He was slow to react(from being confused)but Jasmin wasn’t certain she was frightened.But he did change her into a vampire and he took her back to his family(Carlisle and Esme)But Jasmin was very different from any other
vampire she was half human because of the dragon’s seed and the curse.For One She couldn’t be totally vampire becuase she’s a dragon and it couldn’t penetrate through that.Second she couldn’t be a total vampire because of the curse being a vampire guarantees
living forever
But Jasmin isn’t suppose to live forever
so that curse and the venom are trying to fight against each other.But Jasmin
was turned into a vampire not a complete vampire but a vampire.Since Edward Cullen was the one who transformed her basically he was her father now,Apart of him was in her so she belonged to him.Esme really clinged to her as well making Esme Jasmin’s mother.At first Edward was distant from Jasmin.But Jasmin eventually figured out the reason.Edward felt sorry for Jasmin because of everything that was going on with her.Plus the fact that it was his fault
she almost died made him angry with himself.He was out hunting chasing a deer.He was playing with it teasing it and it got out of his reach and when he found it again it was dead then he saw that the whole thing caused a car accident.Jasmin’s car accident, When he told Jasmin she reasured him that she was glad to be a vampire it gave her a smidge bit of hope from the curse.
But Edward wouldn’t ever forgive himself.
Eventually Jasmin met the rest of the Cullens(Jasper,Alice,Emmett,Rosealie)
Jasmin was managing very well with
being a part vampire and all.Even though Jasmin was vampire she never had that immediate thirst that all vampires had.It took almost a month for her to be thirsty.Carlisle was very intrigued with Jasmin he assumed that she could still grow and eat and act just like any regular human and she could.
But when she would get thirsty since she was human it would affect her that way.Example her voice becomes hoarce
if she doesn’t go hunting or if she avoids
it.It sounds as if she was wheezing.It’s not very good on Jasmin’s part .
OK soooo that’s what happened so far
I still can’t believe that I had to retype that over OMg but it’s ok at least you guys get to see it.Umm well I’m going to have to put up another question for First thirst but I wanted to skim through what happened so far.I hope you guys liked it
Jasmin Cullen~A Midnight Countess By Victoria S.her description:)
Author Note~OH and sorry if I burst some bubbles but she is connected to twilight I’m sorry but it was just so fascinating to have her apart of it I weaved her into twilight lol pathetic right but I did she fits in perfectly because I’ve created a reason for why she wasn’t there sometimes when Edward met Bella and why Bella wasn’t able to interact with Jasmin
and everything.But the weird thing is how much she fits in like I looked at the twilight movie and alot of scenes just screamed Jasmin.Like she was meant to be in it ,but if for some reason I get stuck then I guess I’ll have to seperate her from the rest of the twilight thing.
But I do get what you guys are saying sooo I’ll take that into consideration:)
I’m going to post the link to her First Thirst through this if you guys want to read it:). . .Once I go type it up. . .Sigh lol
but thanks again:)~Victoria S.
You’re stories are very creative and interesting. I do agree with Jenny about the Cullen reference, I know you like the twilight series (as do I) but you do not need to attach your story to this as you have enough creative talent to tell Jasmin’s story alone.
Good Luck and keep writing x
CCFreedom | Feb 02, 2010
Firstly, it sounds brilliant although one thing NEEDS to be changed.
Jasmin’s last name.
Cullen is a shockingly popular surname thanks to Twilight, it would probably sound far more original if you choose a different surname. Since Dragons are such a big part of the story the surname Drago or Drako might be good ones.
Unless this is a fanfiction for Twilight in which case STOP WHAT YOU’RE DOING! DROP THE PEN OR KEYBOARD.
This would be a very good stand alone story if you severed all connections with Twilight, drop every Twilight reference and start anew as your own story.
Jenny | Feb 02, 2010
HAYYYYYYYYY CUZZO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luv these ideas and the dragons are reallly cool and i think its a geat idea that the story is linked to twilight ( BIG FAN OF TWILIGHT) and since i am with you hen you write these i think it is awesome because its like jasmin was ment to be in this story some of the parts in the movie and the book fall rite into place like this is where jasmin comes in its just AWESOME with and E lol (insider) aka (IJ) lol (another insider) haha great job cuzzo
SarAH F. BaBy CArteR | Feb 02, 2010
Well, I’m going to be honest here.
At first, I thought you had a Mary sue (a flawless Character of a female), but the more you explained the things she can’t do, makes it less of a Mary Sue. Which is good.
Secondly, it sounds like you’re comparing it to Twilight or connecting it. But, I can tell you’re using some examples of the power and changed a few things. So, that’s a good thing. As long there’s no vampire in this, you’re good to go. Last name, Cullen is common in the reality, so don’t worry if others say it’s because you’re linking it to Twilight. You have the right to use it as much as you want. Always remember that.
Thirdly, I think that if you focus more on her family’s history battle a little more, it might interests like what happened before Jasmin got sent to the humans’ world? Or, how is she safe in this humans’ world? Is there any other weakness could have in the humans’ world? Is her power still intact, stronger, weaker, or remains the same? How does she blends in this world? Who would take in immigrant like her? Such like that.
Keep on writing your story and do it how you want it. If people are going to be considering a connection/link to Twilight. Keep this in mind, you wrote it originally and you used your own imagination! Be proud of your writing skills! I think this story can take on very well and it does make more wonder even more. Stick to what you write and don’t let anyone tell you what you can and cannot do in your story/book.
princessbetty001 | Feb 02, 2010